Hikikomori: The syndrome of juvenile social isolation. Analysis, education, technologies.
Hikikomori: El síndrome de aislamiento social juvenil. Análisis, educación, tecnologías.
Hikikomori: A síndrome do isolamento social juvenil. Análise, educação, tecnologias.
Andrea Cueto Florido
Universidad de Málaga
https://orcid.org/0009-0009-2406-6585
andreacuetoflorido@gmail.com
Hikikomori:
Youth social isolation syndrome in the context of education, school
organisation and diagnostic analysis.
Abstract
Youth social isolation syndrome, also known as Hikikomori, a term introduced into Japanese society by Tamaki Saito, is part of one of the biggest problems in today's society, as many people are addicted to the Internet. This essay presents data on the extent of this phenomenon not only in its place of origin, but also on a large scale. For the most part, this pathology occurred in young men from any social stratum, with an aversion to rejection and criticism, due to school failure, bullying, anxiety, among others, but today it occurs in a large part of the population. Likewise, a personal vision and possible solutions for this case are presented.
Keywords: Hikikomori, Internet, addiction, isolation, pathology, education, young people.
Resumen
El síndrome de aislamiento social juvenil, también conocido como Hikikomori, término introducido en la sociedad japonesa por Tamaki Saito, forma parte de uno de los grandes problemas de la sociedad actual, ya que son numerosas las personas adictas a Internet. Este ensayo muestra datos sobre la extensión de este fenómeno no solo en su lugar de origen sino también a gran escala. En su mayoría, esta patología se daba en jóvenes varones de cualquier estrato social, con aversión al rechazo y a la crítica, debido a fracaso escolar, bullying, ansiedad, entre otros, pero hoy en día se da en una gran parte de la población. Asimismo, se muestra una visión personal, y posibles soluciones a este caso.
Palabras clave: Hikikomori, Internet, adicción, aislamiento, patología, educación, jóvenes.
ABSTRACT
Juvenile
social isolation syndrome, also known as Hikikomori, a term introduced into
Japanese society by Tamaki Saito, is one of the major problems of today's
society, as many people are addicted to the Internet. This essay provides data
on the extent of this phenomenon not only in its place of origin but also on a
large scale. Mostly, this
pathology was found in young males from any social stratum, with an aversion to
rejection and criticism, due to school failure, bullying, anxiety, among
others, but nowadays it is found in a large part of the population. Also,
this essay shows a personal vision and possible solutions to this case.
Keywords:
Internet, addiction,
isolation, pathology, education, young people.
Hikikomori:
El síndrome de aislamiento social
juvenil en el contexto de la educación, la organización escolar y el análisis
diagnóstico.
RESUMEN
El
síndrome de aislamiento social juvenil, también conocido como Hikikomori,
término introducido en la sociedad japonesa por Tamaki Saito, forma parte de
uno de los grandes problemas de la sociedad actual, ya que son numerosas las
personas adictas a Internet. Este ensayo muestra datos sobre la extensión de
este fenómeno no solo en su lugar de origen sino también a gran escala. En su mayoría, esta
patología se daba en jóvenes varones de cualquier estrato social, con aversión
al rechazo y a la crítica, debido a fracaso escolar, bullying, ansiedad, entre
otros, pero hoy en día se da en una gran parte de la población. Asimismo, en este
ensayo se muestra una visión personal y posibles soluciones a este caso.
Palabras
clave: Internet, adicción,
aislamiento, patología, educación, jóvenes.
Hikikomori:
a síndrome do isolamento social dos jovens no contexto da educação, da
organização escolar e da análise diagnóstica.
Resumo
A síndrome do isolamento social dos jovens, também conhecida como Hikikomori, termo introduzido na sociedade japonesa por Tamaki Saito, faz parte de um dos maiores problemas da sociedade atual, uma vez que muitas pessoas são viciadas na Internet. Este ensaio mostra como este fenómeno está generalizado, não só no seu local de origem, mas também em grande escala. Esta patologia era maioritariamente encontrada em jovens do sexo masculino de qualquer estrato social, com aversão à rejeição e à crítica, devido ao insucesso escolar, bullying, ansiedade, entre outros, mas atualmente encontra-se numa grande parte da população. Este ensaio apresenta também uma visão pessoal e possíveis soluções para este caso.
Palavras-chave: Internet, dependencia, isolamento, patología, educação, jovens.
INTRODUCTION
Pathologies present in society, specifically technological dependence, and those related to the inability of some people, especially young people, to relate to each other, are increasing, Hikikomori being a clear example of this.
In this paper, I
am going to deal with the pathologies present in society, specifically
technological dependence, related to the inability of some people, especially
young people, to relate to each other, Hikikomori being a clear example of
this.
Adolescence is a period of development in
which many changes occur and at the same time the period in which many mental
health problems begin to appear, such as those mentioned above. Many
people Depending on who
we ask, they may or may not describe this stage as
complicated, as they begin to experience significant physical and personal
changes, as well as being a very sensitive and chaotic period. This
age period
ranges from
approximately 10-13 years
old to 18-20 years
old, also known as
puberty and characterised mainly by sexual maturation. During
this periodage,
usually,
inopportune and immature decisions are made,
that bringing
numerous consequences,
and with through
which they learn and differentiate between good
and evil, the first toxic relationships appear, the feeling of belonging to the
group, the construction of personality, the mismanagement of emotions, among
many others. Palacios (2019) points out the following:
Today's adolescents are people who were
born right at the turn of the millennium (between the end of the 1990s and
2008), immersed in a technological context, where social networks are their
main source of social interaction and communication, where work at home and the
virtualisation of educational processes are promoted, and where loneliness is a
common element in their lives. (Pp. 2).
WhNow, being this
period as described so far, why does society (families, teachers, etc.) force
adolescents, at that age, to make such important
decisions as what
they want to do in general, for work, for living, whether they want to
live with their parents (in the case of a separationdivorce), etc.? Not to mention
that some of them at this age already have to work in minimal conditions,
having to face adult life without being adults, and without having the
mental and physical development that this entails.
Since information and communication
technologies (ICT) have been introduced into our lives, there have been
numerous studies on the use of these technologies, showing the great danger
they represent for the new generations. There are many young people who are
addicted to new technologies and social networks, which
causes them various problems in their academic results, real personal
relationships, etc.with major problems in their educational and
developmental processes due to them. Although the Iinternet has many
benefits, it is worth mentioning that it must behas
to be employed used in
a correct waycorrectly, given that otherwise
it can cause serious obsessions related to mental and social problems.
Echeburúa and de Corral state: “‘In some circumstances, especially affecting
adolescents, the Internet and technological resources can become an end and not
a means”
’ (2010, p.3). This is
due to the fact that new technologies have the capacity to trap a subject in
certain cases, since the virtual world can produce a fictitious identity and a
social distancing or a deviation from the real world, related to the loss of contact
and the inability to relate.
Any excessive affection for a certain
action can lead to addiction, whether or not there is a chemical element. According
to the Diccionario de la RAE, when we speak of addiction we refer to “‘dependence
on substances or activities that are harmful to health or psychic balance”’
(DRAE, 2021).
Such addiction is increasing, in a hurried order, also
posing
a great threat to society by accepting that information is in the hands of the
entire population and by providing new ways of communication, information and
entertainment. These tools introduce new forms of connection between
individuals, which are essential in the fields of education, health, business
and others, as ICTs are nowadays indispensable in every
aspect
today.
TeSo far we know that technology is one of the
great obsessions of many young people today, and that the world is totally
digitalised, but do we know what the concept of ‘Hikikomori’ refers to? ItWell, it is a social pathology
that, which refers to behaviour, considered as
‘non-normative,’ within the society to which the person being analysed belongs,. This
pathology is related to addiction to information
and communication technologies (ICT),
whether from a mobile phone, a computer, or any other device
that makes it possible. Both mobile phones and computers have become
indispensable elements in our daily lives, for work, entertainment,
communication, etc. However, the problem dissipates is when the person who
uses them is not able to relate to the real world unless it is through
virtuality. Likewise, many people are unaware that their mobile device is their
own spy, because it is capable of offering you all the information you are
interested in at the very moment you want it, without you asking for it, and
all this is possible thanks to our previous searches, the acceptance of
cookies, the ‘likes’ on networks, etc. Hence the addiction. In the following, we
will go more deeply into the term.
Theoretical background
According to professionals
related to the phenomenon of study, such as De la Calle and Muñoz, we find that
De
la Calle and Muñoz state: “‘Hikikomori is a recently described disorder
characterised by asocial and avoidant behaviour that leads to social withdrawal”’ (2018, p. 2). Numerous studies
have shown that this disorder is specific to the state of Japan, and is known to be an
epidemic linked to the secretive environment of Japanese society and the esteem
in which it holds loneliness. It has therefore come to be thought of as part of
a ‘culture-bound epidemic.’.
Tamaki Saito, a Japanese psychologist,
first brought the Hikikomori concept to light in 1998 in his book ‘Sakateki
hikikomori, an endless adolescence’. This
concept comes from the terms hiki and komoru,
which refer to the following verbs: “‘to be
enclosed”
and’, “‘to be
isolated.”’,
etc. Yume Nikki has also been quite well known in
this respect, as it had a great impact in Japan
(Grau, 2021).
Returning
to the author Tamaki Saito, iIt is necessary to mention that Saitohe has been very
criticised in his research due to the lack of accuracy, and his studies were
also catalogued as worrying, however, thanks to his work and his great workhis
research,
the social isolation syndrome or Hikikomori syndrome was named and became
known, at first only in Japan, and then in the rest
of the countries,
since this syndrome is not
limited to the Japanese population. Based on information from an article
published by the Japanese society Government in July 2010, I can
state that there are approximately 700,000 cases of Hhikikomori people in
Japan, while other studies show that the worldwide figure is between 800,000 and 1,400,000 cases
(Hattori, 2006). Because
of this, Tamaki Saito's effort was recognised. Becerra-Canales
et al. (2023) Becerra et al. (2023) show the meaning of the
Hikikomori concept as follows:
It is a cross-cultural psychiatric
phenomenon, without becoming a psychiatric illness, and represents a new
diagnostic category which is not yet included in the Diagnostic and Statistical
Manual of Mental Disorders or DSM-5,; but which aspires to
become a clinical term in psychiatry. (Pp. 3).
This pathology mainly affects young people
who withdraw from society, isolating themselves in their rooms for an
indeterminate period of time, mainly in the home where they live with their
parents, who are mainly primarily people with a high economic
level, which is why it occurs mainly in countries such as Japan, India, the
United States and Spain. These subjects reject all types of communication, as
their life revolves around video games and the Internet, with no conception of
whether it is day or night.
Feixa states: “‘In a
study carried out by the Japanese government in 2002 on 3300 former Hikikomori,
17% were unable to leave the house, and 10% could not even leave their own room”’
(2005, p. 5). This withdrawal
mechanism is gradual and appears when adolescents begin to confine themselves
to their bedrooms for longer and longer hours, consumed by the Internet. It is
a process in which these people neglect their environment (studies, family and
friends) and themselves, as their hygiene is less and less, their food is
scarce, etc. In addition, behaviour is different in each case, with aggressive
tendencies in some and depression and anxiety in others, with the latter in
many cases being overwhelmed by suicide.
Authors such as Lindblad among
et al.others (2024) carried out a
study on the increase of physical illnesses in young people, being in a NEET
position, which means without education or employment, so much so that in 2015
there were 40,000,000 cases in the Organisation
for Economic Co-operation and Development (OECD)
countries,
and the percentage,
between that number, increases in the
case of having some type of diversity, and the risk of suffering from
Hikikomori is there.
increasing the
percentage in the case of having some kind of diversity, thereby increasing the
risk of suffering from Hikikomori syndrome.
Such a disorderHikikomori refers to an extreme
enthusiasm for digital culture, linked to a terror of coping with their adult
life supported by competition, whose aim is to ‘stop time’ and ‘shrink space,’, turning it into a
fictitious one. This
has provoked in me a strong déjà vu, because I have gone back a few years, rememberingrelated
to a
strong virus that led to a global pandemic in the year 2020, the main
protagonist being Covid-19. This gave rise to an era of confinement to which I
have seen a clear relationship, as the entire world population was locked in
their homes. Paricio and Pando (2020), point out: “‘A study conducted on a
child and youth population in China indicates that 22.6% of their students have
presented depressive symptoms during the COVID-19 pandemic, a figure higher
than previous studies conducted on primary schools (17.2%)”’ (2020, p. 5): . Ssimilar symptoms are
reported by people with Hikikomori syndrome., It is worth noting that aamong the most notable
characteristics of these individuals, it is worth noting is that they was were fundamentally asocial
men, with a panic
fear
of
criticism or rejection. Today, however, the syndrome is known to be
understoodsuffered by both genders;, because, the prevalence in
boys varies from region to region, as several studies have shown that in Slovakia the
data are differenta research. The TEM Journal conducted
a study with 2767 primary school students in Slovakia, and used a sample of
2,767 students with an average age of 12-13 years, and found that the prevalence in
boys had changed andHikikomori syndrome was now more prevalent
in girls than in boys (Niklová, Zošáková and Šimšíková, 2024).
Additionally, the
study “‘Prevalence of and Factors Influencing
Hikikomori in Osaka City, Japan: A Population-Based Cross-Sectional Study”’ offers
anA
research
analysis of the incidences and variables associated with this pathology, in the Japanese
population, based on a questionnaire conducted between 2020 and 2021,
with.
This article involved the participation of 3,092 subjects, aged between 15 and 64
years, with
thegave a 2.3%
rate
of Hhikikomori,
showing being 2.3%. In
addition, the analysis
indicated that there are many variables that
directly indicate the development of this addiction, such as unemployment, lack
of a safe place, or psychiatric history... Also, this analysis
highlights the prevalence in males (Kanai et al., 2024).
Bradley (2024) analyses this pathology in
Japan and points out how sufferers are deprived of desire and a link with
reality, with a great deal of introversion. on the outside. All of this in an environment
of a mercantilist society that accentuates abandonment.
The
Covid-19
pandemic and the period of confinement led to
moments of anxiety, depression and boredom, and the Internet was used to
alleviate this, which may have led to addiction
and Hikikomori syndrome in many adolescents,
thus generating the síndrome (Mooney,
2024).
But
w The
causes of Hikikomori syndrome include, but not limited to,What are the causes of
this type of disorder? AWell, among the
reasons for Hikikomori syndrome, it is worth mentioning that the family overprotection, possible academic pressure,
school failure, bullying, or a personal problem,
either related to friends, or a possible romantic partner. In addition, another
very important factor refers toIt
is very important to see the socio-economic variables of the families, since
an adolescent who presents with this syndrome, and belongs to a high
socio-economic context, will be easier to preserve. S omeone
living inthan a family with minimal
income, since
it will be necessary for the adolescentmay
need
to workfind
a job,
or study, or both, in order to subsistsurvive, which may cause the
shock of reality to become a solution to the syndrome in isolated cases (Concina, Frate andy Biasutti, 2024). Realities
have been complex for a long time…
The problems they refer not only had to do with poor infrastructure (obsolete software and machines), access conditions (four or five students per machine), poor teacher training, virtually no integration of the computer workshop with the rest of the curriculum, censorship and prohibitions (no gaming), but also with the profound contradiction between school culture and youth cultures. (Winogur, 2006, p. 8).
The object of this
research may give rise This can also lead to great pain, both
socially and physically, as the individual is socially excluded, as he/she is
immersed in a screen, which leads to great physical consequences, such as back pain due
to posture, vision difficulties, headaches, etc. (This is supported by Pérez et al., (202019), who state: “‘More recently,
neuroscience research has connected the experience of physical pain with the
experience of social pain by identifying a shared underlying neural pathway”’ (p. 3).
Now, do adolescents
with Hikikomori syndrome feel this exclusion? Well, as Cáceres
(2021n.d.) points out: “‘For many of these young
people, virtuality has become a form of substitution for face-to-face contact
with their peers”’ (p. 12). From my point of
view, I believe that one of the causes that has led these adolescents to
immerse themselves in technology may have been that social loneliness, finding
their peers on social networks or their refuge being a computer and a keyboard,
so I think that they do feel it, and that this wound is
expressedmanifested.
Thus, subjects with
more social support or who spend more time with friends show reduced CCAd and
AI activity, and individuals who have a higher anxiety score and tendency to
worry about rejection by others show increased CCAd and AI activity in response
to social exclusion. (Perez
et al., 2019, p.3)
ISimilarly, in 20198, a report on
loneliness took place on BBC Radio 4. The report
showed a research that involved 55,000 individuals from numerous countries, and aged between 16 and 99,
a high percentage of whom were women:. “‘Many report feeling
lonely despite being surrounded by people”’ (The Family Watch, 2019, p. 1).
It is different with families, who in many
cases can only provide food at their son or daughter's bedroom door, without
even being able to see their son or daughter's face. Many others shy away from
the idea, i.e. they do not admit that they have a Hhikikomori descendantchild, lest other people, so
that the rest of the people related to them could notice itboth known and not so
well known, become aware of it: . In the latter case,
shame
is
worthprevails, instead of more than seeking psychological
help for the young person to get out of the situation he or she is in.
WoMeng et al. (2019) distinguish
between two types of Hikikikomori: primary Hhikikomori, who do not
have psychiatric disorders, and secondary hikikomori, who do have psychiatric
disorders associated with the syndrome itself, the most common being
depression. However, it should be noted that this is not an empirically
supported classification, but only a theoretical concept. Amendola (2024) points
out that depending on the criteria used, the subject suffering from this
pathology could contemplate
see a severe form of psychiatric
disorders, both
disorders or only an exaggerated form of social isolation provoked by different
psychosocial indices and unfavourable situations, without necessarily
presenting a diagnosis of his or her own.
With
regard to treatment, it should be noted that the involvement of family members
is essential, in addition to psychoeducation at both individual and group
level, with cognitive-behavioural techniques being the most commonly used, in
addition to the use of antidepressants such as sertraline.
Critical analysis
CRITICAL REFLECTION
A phenomenon like the one analyzed occurs on such a scale could surprise those who are not used to the object of study. We have been able to verify that this is an epidemic that affects many people. However, it is not given the importance it requires; it is enough to turn on the television and watch the news, where we can realize that much more importance is given to any incident related to Cristiano Ronaldo, any other athlete, influencers, politicians, etc., than to a problem that affects more and more people. We need writings like this so that we are not blind to the issue, because until it affects us fully, we do not realize that this is really happening around us, like so many other issues related to mental health, technology addictions, and social isolation.
It is worth
mentioning that at the beginning I had no idea about the concept of this
syndrome, that is to say, I knew that it was present in society, but I did not
imagine that it could occur on such a scale, since I have been able to verify
that it is an epidemic that affects many, many people. However, it is not given
the importance it deserves, it is enough to turn on the television and watch
the news. With this precise act, we can see that much more importance is given
to the incident that took place in Cristiano Ronaldo's house than to an
epidemic that affects so many people. This makes us blind to the issue, because
we do not realise that this is really happening right next to us until it
touches us.
Extracting the information, that I have been able to gather, has been of great help in breaking patterns and showing the great impact that the Internet has on our lives. Among the risks that occur due to its excess are not only addiction, but also the loss of privacy, accessibility to certain content not suitable for minors, cyberbullying... among others. However, I do not mean that new technologies should be eliminated from the lives of adolescents or from schools, but that every adult, and in this case, every educator, should offer a series of guidelines to students so that they know how they should be used appropriately.
Therefore, extracting
the information I have been able to gather has been of great help to me to
break all my schemes and realise the great impact that the internet has on our
lives, since among the risks that occur due to the excess of it is not only addiction,
but I can also mention the loss of privacy, accessibility to certain content
that is not suitable for minors, cyberbullying, among others. However, this
does not mean that new technologies should be eliminated from the lives of
adolescents or from educational centres, but rather that every adult, and in
this case, every educator, should offer a series of guidelines to students so
that they know how they should be used appropriately.
At this time, I believe that education is
the key to putting an end to the social isolation of many young people. We must
give the starting signal so that this does not repeat itself generation after
generation and so that the individuals who are suffering this torment today
realise that the solution really lies behind beyond
the door of the room in which they are
imprisoned. Plato’s analogy of
the cave, which he uses to explain his Theory of Forms, is a helpful way to
think of Hikikomori syndrome as well.The latter has led me to think of Plato and the
well-known myth of the cave, since in my view something similar happens in the
life of the Hikikomori. In the myth of the cavethis analogy, Plato shows us how
people who are imprisoned in the cave pass from a dark world
to a world full of light, the real world, just as happens in the life of the
Hikikomori, who are prisoners of real life. They are ignorant of knowledge and
live in a complete fiction, as in the myth of the cave. Abensour states: “‘His ascent into the
realm of ideas has caused him to lose his sense of orientation in the cave, he
nurtures thoughts all the more dangerous because they lead him to contradict
the evidence of common sense”’ (2007, p. 114).
Education, in my
opinion, is the most powerful weapon to change the world, since educating
involves forming committed and responsible individuals, with a great capacity
for critical thinking. School should not be a space for indoctrination and
instilling fear, within an educational system designed by the world's elites to
satisfy their interests (Betancur, 2023).In relation to what
has changed in me, it is worth mentioning that pPreviously I did not
conceive education as a possible solution to
Hikikomori, but rather I thought that it was part of a
transformation of the society in which we live, without realising that this
change must be directed by the teaching that we provide on a daily basis. In my
opinion, education is the most powerful weapon to change the world, since
education implies training committed and responsible individuals, with a great
capacity for critical thinking.
Education has the
essential mission of teaching how to think and how to cooperate. Educating will
be one of the basic challenges for human beings to become who we are and to be
able to build responses to the current challenges.
(Jover, 2013, p. 6)
Currently, I
believe that tThere
are numerous treatments to end this epidemic, among which I
can point toare
therapeutic, social and educational approaches, focusing on the latter. From
my point of view, an example of how toI
believe we can reduce the cases
and severity of Hikikomori deal with this from an educational
point of view could
be through
activities that work on emotional intelligence, interpersonal and social skills
and the construction of their future.
Conclusions
PERSONAL ASSESSMENT
It
is necessary to learn a lot of information about the social isolation syndrome
that haunts many young people today, as well as ways to treat and prevent it.
We have to think about loneliness, but not only about the fact that Hikikomori
find themselves like this, but about the fact that human beings cannot be
isolated. In the case of Hikikomori, instead of being surrounded by real
people, they live among fictitious individuals. Do people run away
from loneliness? We have the habit of being surrounded by people all the time,
so if we lose ourselves in solitude for a few seconds, we already feel
abandoned and sad. This has such an impact on our lives that we feel incapable
of carrying out certain actions by ourselves. However, solitude could
have numerous
advantages for mental health (health to which many people today do not give the
importance it deserves), since our mind is adequately trained and cooperates in
a more appropriate way when the person is alone. In my opinion, this is because
in this way our concentration can increase, thus having a better performance in
all areas.From doing this
essay, I have been able to learn a lot of information about the social
isolation syndrome that plagues many young people today, as well as ways to
treat and prevent it.
Also, researching the
information to carry it out has made me think about loneliness, but not about
the fact that Hikikomori are lonely because that is not true, but that human
beings cannot be lonely. In the case of the Hikikomori, instead of being surrounded
by real people, they are surrounded by fictitious individuals. But why do
people shy away from loneliness? We are used to being surrounded by people all
the time, so if we lose ourselves in solitude for a few seconds, we already
feel abandoned and sad. This has such an impact on our lives that we feel
incapable of carrying out certain actions for ourselves. However, it has been
fully demonstrated that solitude has many advantages for mental health (a
health that many people nowadays do not give the importance it needs), as our
mind has a proper formation and cooperates in a more appropriate way when we
are alone. From my point of view, this is due to the fact that in this way our
concentration can be increased, thus having a better performance in all areas.
FINAL CONSIDERATIONS
Thanks to all of the above, we can deduce that it is essential to raise awareness of this syndrome that has currently become a global pandemic, in my opinion. The same occurs with the fear caused by the social and economic transformations that are happening today in the world, leaving a large part of the population without personal tools, not knowing how to face these changes. However, it is necessary to point out that we have many educational advances that we must use to end this pandemic, among others those related to innovative methodologies, that is, if students receive traditional education, they tend not to feel motivated to go to class, so they look for that motivation elsewhere. Let us make students feel attracted to school, and then, they will not have as much need to use the computer or mobile phone. However, it is necessary to establish times that subjects must respect to make use of each display, in addition to prohibiting the use of certain websites, so that they cannot easily fall into the addiction that ICT can cause.
Another way to avoid addiction is through parents: stop buying mobile phones or computers at an early age, do not buy them until they are really necessary, as well as not lending the mobile phone to children aged 5 or younger. However, the Internet is necessary for educational purposes. In this case, kids could use their parents' laptop for educational purposes by establishing a schedule and being supervised. In the case that it is desired to use it for leisure, always starting from a schedule and at an appropriate age, being informed in advance of the web pages that can be visited, in addition to the importance of not accepting cookies without first being informed, thereby promoting critical thinking in the individual.
New questions arise:
if there are so many people suffering from this pathology, why is nothing being
done about it? We must continue to investigate the issue. Likewise, this study
has made me think of new lines of research, among which I can mention the following:Thanks to all of the
above, we can deduce that it is essential to raise awareness of this syndrome,
which has now become one of the biggest global pandemics in history. The same
goes for the fear of the social and economic transformations that are taking
place in the world today, leaving many areas without personal weapons, which do
not know how to face these changes. However, it is
necessary to point out that we have many educational advances that we must use
to put an end to this pandemic, including those related to innovative
methodologies, i.e. if students receive traditional teaching, they tend not to
feel motivated to go to class, so they look for that motivation elsewhere. ISo if we make
students feel attracted to school, they will not need to use the computer or
mobile phone as much. However, it is necessary to establish a series of time
limits that the subjects must respect in order to use each thing, as well as
prohibiting the use of certain pages, so that they cannot easily fall into the
addiction that information and communication technologies (ICT) can provoke.
Another way to avoid addiction lies with parents and the purchase of mobile
phones or computers at an early age, as they can should
avoid buying their
children phonesm until they are reallyabsolutely necessary, as well
as not lending mobiles to children aged 5 or even younger. However, the
Internet is necessary for educational use. In this case, the subjects could use
the parents' laptop for educational purposes by establishing a timetable and
being supervised. In the case of leisure use, always starting from a timetable
and at an appropriate age, being informed in advance of the web pages that can
be visited, as well as the importance of not accepting cookies without first
being informed, thereby promoting the individual's critical thinking.
First, At the end of this
essay, new questions have arisen in my mind, such as, if there are so many
people who suffer from this pathology, why is nothing being done about it, and
which incite me to continue investigating the subject. Likewise,
this study has made me think about new lines of research with which we could
continue investigating the topic, among which I can mention the followingThese
remaining questions point to the need for future research, such as those topics
listed below:
The first of them
refers to theAan exhaustive study of
the factors that incite this addiction, whether psychological, family,
educational, cultural or social factors, an example of which issuch as social pressure.…
In the case of the numerous disruptive changes that we have seen from the last three decades of the 20th century to the AI of the present millennium, what is relevant is a specific social evaluation of each system or technological device, where ethical criteria that weigh the affectation or safeguarding of freedom and human autonomy take precedence. (Colina, 2024, p. 5)
Next, The
second of them could be related to tthe
consequences that Hikikomorithis
confinement can cause for mental health should be
examined, therefore relating
it to depression or anxiety and offering small touchesinputs on these and the
repercussion and impact of ICTs. The last of them refers to theLastly, I recommend an investigation of
possible ways of action or programs for the reintegration of these subjects
into the population. All of these analyzes could be carried out in specific
countries or as a whole.
In today's society, new technologies are
essential, however, as I have already mentioned, we must use them properly,
otherwise, many problems could arise. Now, Villamarin,
Botello and Muñoz state:
A large part of the
students who do not make good use of ICTs are those who do not have knowledge
about ICTs, for example: what are ICTs, what tools are part of ICTs or what is
the proper use that should be given to ICTs. (2014, p.5)
Finally, our role as future education
professionals is to offer this information to our students, and the first thing
we must do is to understand the current situation regarding the use of ICT, how
they are used and where the main problems are
in relation to them. Achieving social inclusion is
feasible, but we must have education as a regular basis
and rely in turn on other professionals in the field of health,
among others, such
as psychologists and,
doctors.,
etc. In addition, as educators, we must promote
correct healthy lifestyle habits in order to prevent disruptive
behaviors bad
behaviour and to avoid these cases of addictions and other similar problems
in adolescents.
Likewise,
it is necessary to know that we have many social reintegration programmes, with
which we can treat this pathology in different ways depending on the region. I will now list a
number ofThese programmes include, but are
not limited to:
On the one hand,
Japan has Regional Youth Support Centres and the NGO
New Start (2020) in Japan. The former provides
the subjects with workshops, psychological support and guidance in many
aspects, while the NGO has a set of shared flats where the individuals can live
with other people, so that they can integrate back into society, respecting
each other's time.
Next, South Korea
Thas
the Youth Recovery Programme
in South Korea, similar to the Regional Youth Support
Centres in Japan.
Finally, Europe has programmes such as Transitions, BetterHelp or Out of the net, which are examples of more personalised and home-based support.
In conclusion, it should be noted that the
aim of all these programmes is to enable people suffering from this pathology
to gradually reintegrate into society. However, as
already mentioned above, the help of these programmes will not be
possible without the involvement of the families, who will have to carry out a
great deal of work in order for their respective children to succeed, including
a series of rules or responsibilities that they must comply with
(Tokuni, 2024). Also, essential in this
process, is the desire and motivation of the individual,
because if he/she does not obeyconsent, the process will be
slowed down. This is why it is essential to connect with the subject and attend
to their needs and interests, in order to focus their attention on something
other than the computer or mobile phone.
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This
paper lacks the basic structure
of
an academic article,
leading to a lack of clarity and organization throughout.
This introduction should be where you discuss the background articles related
to your THESIS
or main point. The end of the introduction should tell me exactly what the main
point of your article is, clearly, and every subsequent (following) part should
connect back to this one main point. If the thesis is that we should use
education to combat Hikikomori syndrome, then the introduction should give us
articles
about the syndrome, its prevalence, etc. then conclude the section with a clear
thesis that will tell the reader EXACTLY what you will
discuss in
the rest of the article.
If it strays from that thesis/ main idea, it should not be included. It
is okay if what you are doing is a literature review (not necessarily doing
your own research
but using previous research to draw your own conclusions) but it needs to be
clear that that is what you are doing. “Previous
literature shows x, y, z trends, which leads me to conclude x, y, z.”
Then in the conclusion
section
you
can
call for future research.
The other comments speak to the more specific changes that repeatedly come up,
like lack of clarity. Using the thesis to organize yourself will help give you
clarity. Making an outline before writing to organize the ideas is also
helpful, and you can use the topic sentence of each paragraph to decide what
you are going to say (and if the topic is not related to your thesis, you can
reapply it or cut it).